He sat in his empty room
Staring at four walls
Sreaming shouts of loneliness
No answer to his calls
Yet, this loner's isolation
to which there seemed no end
Could have all been swept away
If he had only found a friend
A friend would be a person
That would rid him of his strife
and give him peace and happiness
A longing love of life
But the loner could not plant the seed
to make a friendship grow
Instead he pondered weary thoughts
Of misery and woe
Then one long and lonely day
This man sat up in bed
and picking up a loaded gun
He held it to his head
A playmate from my youth
The man that I now mourn
memories of my childhood
are now forever torn
Life is a strange adventure
The good times and the bad
Some days are filled with happiness
Today I'll just feel sad
5 comments:
touching.
Very deep.
Great going.
Keep'em rolling!
I so want to post one of my poems or short stories, but I'm afraid to; simply b/c they aren't copyrighted.
That was... wow. Chilling, yet very good.
If someone could get rich with my poem,I would be shocked lol. Just write a copyright number at the end who will no the difference?
Not just a limerick wonder!
Have you read Poison Tree by William Blake? It's very similar in style to yours here. Striking because of its child-like simple rhymes and rhythm yet the content is very much more serious.
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