Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Theme Thursday (LIMO)

HIDE OUT


The LIMO arrived and Jason looked back at his house one more time, wondering if he would ever return there again. He had been selected for an adventure that some people would die to go on, but many others would not have accepted . He stepped into the LIMO, while neighbors looked on, and then it sped away, on a 2 hour drive to the Kennedy Space center.
Upon arrival at the Space center, Jason saw that there were 19 other LIMOS, parked in a line in front of the entrance. He got out and was escorted to a room, where the other 19 people waited. They were about his age, all athletic in appearance, all seemingly nervous. He was handed a pamphlet, and upon opening it, he saw each person’s photo with a short biography. They were all single, all professionals, including doctors , engineers, and scientists. He felt out of place, being a construction foreman.
He had received a form in the mail a few months earlier, saying that NASA was looking for volunteers to spend one year aboard the international space station. He filled out the form and sent it in, figuring that he would never be considered, but to his amazement, he had gotten a response within a week. It said that he was chosen and that he would have to spend 2 months in training and would be lifting off in the month of September. So, now, on July 1st, Jason sat in a room with 19 strangers , waiting for the next step. He was getting excited.
The two months went quickly and the 20 people really bonded. He had met a woman named Cheryl, who he really found to be quite attractive, but there was no liberty during their training, and he could not explore anything more than being friendly. He had been bruised and battered and nearly drowned, but he had come through it ok, and now, in early September, it was launch time.
They were led to the shuttle, which had been modified to act almost like an airplane, with rows of sturdy seats. It was the 20 of them and a 4 man flight crew. People gathered around the launch like they had not done in years! Civilians in space had not been tried since the Challenger disaster, it was big news. The launch went off like clockwork and their training had paid off, no one got sick, well, seriously, anyway, and the ride to the space station was mesmerizing.
They entered the station, it was not very nice, at least that is what Jason thought. It had a very hospital type feel to it. Spending a year here was going to be tough. They were led to rooms and were assigned sleeping areas, it was cramped for 20 people. He wondered if this was some sort of experiment to test people’s sanity? After putting their personal belongings in their living space, The flight crew escorted them to a small conference room, where a monitor had been set up. A face appeared on the monitor, it was The President! How cool was that? Thought Jason. The president spoke:

“ Welcome to your new home for the next year, or as long as it takes. A strain of a Super Ebola Virus has been found in 4 different countries, including a town in the United States, and according to all computer models, the entire world population will be infected within 7 months. There is no cure or way to stop it! Ebola is 100% fatal. No one has survived this strain, it is an airborne virus, and even the tightest isolation efforts have failed. The computers also say that if the world population is eliminated, that the virus will lose it’s host and die out. We have automated your return, and your pilots know the drill. Some government officials and scientists are going to try to survive in a controlled environment. You will be fed news channels and government updates as long as they are available. Keep us in your prayers, and God bless.”

Jason was in shock! He looked around the room and saw the dropped jaws and saw the tears of the people who were obviously thinking about their family members. Now he knew why they were all single, and childless, and such a variety of knowledge was required. This was crazy!
The time went slow, each day listening to the news updates. Whole towns were dying, and dead bodies were littering the streets. Then the news reports became sporadic, and the government updates disappeared. Jason had gotten very close to Cheryl, and often found himself in her caring arms. Three months had passed and there were no more news updates, they were now alone, it was very scary. Jason remembered seeing re runs of “The Twilight Zone”, and felt like he had been dropped right into the middle of an episode.
A year passed and the flight crew decided that 8 months without contact was enough. They Decided that they should stick with the one year schedule. Jason and Cheryl had become intimate and Cheryl had become pregnant, he could not wait to get back home, even though he knew it would be like a war zone. He had spent enough time in space. He was actually looking forward to his new adventure. They could find an island, or live anywhere that they wanted, it was really a bizarre new life ahead of them!
The shuttle landed perfectly at the Johnson space center in Texas, and the 24 people all exited the craft and hugged and cried. They knew that the fate of mankind was in their hands. That is when a car drove up, it was a LIMO. A man got out of the car and yelled, “Welcome Home! Thank God I am not alone anymore!”
Cheryl, who was a doctor asked him, “Didn’t you get sick”?
“Yea,” he replied , “But I didn’t die, I felt like I was going to, it was pretty bad”!
Cheryl looked at Jason and started to tear up, she knew that they were doomed. Even though the man had fought the virus off, his body was still a host, a way that nature found to preserve her lethal killer! You cannot run from Mother Nature, if she is going to get you, there is no place that you can hide!

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46 comments:

Jill said...

Well...this is just freaky!!! Limo as a most certain vehicle of DEATH!!

When will you write the screen play?

Hit 40 said...

Great story! Very PG.

No violence, vampires, or gore?? Are you ok?

The ending was a great way to wrap it all back up to the beginning of the story. Nice.

otin said...

AM I OK? NEVER!!!!!! LOL!

Get off my case, blog wife!!!!hehe

willow said...

And I was all primed for a blood sucking limo tale.

You know what I like about your stories? Your female characters all have middle aged names, like Cheryl and Janice. Cute.

Green-Eyed Momster said...

I think it's very fitting that as I read this, I was listening to Zombie.

Great post!

Maggie said...
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Maggie said...

:O I love all of your writings. This one was great and it's scary to imagine something like this might happen.

Brian Miller said...

you could totally sell the movie rights...m. night would do it in a heartbeat...love the twist!

Little Ms Blogger said...

Funny thing, as I was reading this, I thought Twilight Zone, but the ending was great.

Smart Mouth Broad said...

Geez, Otin. Now I'm scared to death. I'll have to go read darsden or Hit40's posts and hope they can take my mind off deadly viruses, virii, vi....ack, you get the idea!

Smart Mouth Broad said...

@Pastor Sharon: Otin's scarin' me!

Baino said...

Yer a word wizard! Did it have to be ebola? Couldn't it have been something a little quicker! GAH!

Dreamhaven said...

Oh, I must admit, the story was well done, but I hate those kinds of endings. I would like to think the doctor had discovered a way to create a vaccine from the blood of the survivor. Happy TT

Pastor Sharon said...

This is movie material! Brian is right!
When are we going to see you in Hollywood? I want to see you walk that red carpet and recieve the awards you deserve. . . Wizard Otin!

This is a freaky sci-fi and I would PAY to go see it! Heck, I'd read the whole book!

Pastor Sharon said...

Smart Mouth Broad: Hang in there. . .and remember, there is nothing to fear but fear itself.

Midtown Girl said...

"Now he knew why they were all single, and childless, and such a variety of knowledge was required."

Were you talking about me? LOL!!

XOXO

Suzanne said...

Damn. That's good. I stopped by to say "Hi Otin," but I'm leaving say "Get me out of this freakin' joint!"

I agree with Maggie. That's movie material. You need to turn it into a screen play and shop it around. We lived in LA for 10 years while I was screwing around at UCLA and meeting lots of "people!" Rob has good friends who wrote screen plays for movies you've probably watched. If you want an introduction, just let me know. You really should expand on this idea. Scared the crap out of me. Especially the end. Yikes.

Love you darling and thanks for the support. You know why I'm up? BECAUSE MY ANKLE IS KILLING ME!!! Ugh. I don't think this is going to work for me.

XO ;)

Amy said...

Otin - I LOVED THIS!!! I was disappointed when it ended.
I would also pay to see this in a movie. You should talk to some "people" about that. Hey. . if you get to walk the red carpet, can I be your date? That would be way cool!!!
I so was expecting them to kill the guy and then go and repopulate the earth or something.

Harnett-Hargrove said...

A new type of apocalypse. Did you dream this first? -Jayne

Stacy (the Random Cool Chick) said...

You always have me glued to my screen when reading any of your stories, Otin! I agree with Brian and the others - you could SO sell it as a movie idea! You usually have a twist at the end, so I should not be surprised by them, but I always am. You're that good. ;)

Wings said...

Another fun twist from you! Cool story - the went from one episode of the "Twilight Zone" to another!

Gaston Studio said...

You did it again Otin! Tooooooo good.

Betsy said...

Yep, you're going to be famous some day with your writing...and we can all say we knew you when....

Raven said...

I don't have time to read the whole post, I'll come back for that, it looks great, but I wanted to tell you I gave you an award at my blog. I don't know if you do awards, so if you don't, don't feel you have to pass it on.

http://stuperheroextraordinaire.blogspot.com/

Have a great day and I'll be back for the story, it looks like another great one!

Raven

subtorp77 said...

otin, muwahahahahahaha! I like your take way better but it still has a familiar feel to it. NICE!

VE said...

Good story. Of course the part where they burn the poor survivor guy to save the rest of humanity was left on the editing floor...

Ms. Salti said...

That was a twist from your last few... I've always been fascinated with Ebola... isn't that strange?

Pseudonymous High School Teacher said...

wow. Did not see that endign coming. Great story Otin.

Vickens said...

Please, please, please write a book!

Skip Simpson said...

Wow! That was a great story with a great twist!

The Constant Complainer said...

Wow, I have to admit, I was pretty impressed with the picture that Tera did. I'm going to check out her blog as we speak.

Hit 40 said...

I have to agree...

this would make a great movie.

Liza said...

Willow's comment made me giggle, and when I read your post I thought, Captain Trips strikes again!

Tom said...

This was excellant....but having read a lot of these TT posts, I'm wondering why Willow didn't suggest Johnny Depp as the main character!

Mango Girl said...

Another wonderful story otin...

Loved the ending!!!

darsden said...

I think I have figured out why you had a chat box then got rid of it..now I see it's back. I added one..but every time I go to comment to somebody it shoots me to the chat box... Stop laughing ...OTIN! ;-)

darsden said...

excellent scary story, why scary cuz it's sooo could happen! Funny twisted ending .. Otin you never let us down! I smell roast.. ;-)

blueviolet said...

That's a freaky tale and like the others, I think it would make a great movie. You're a pro at this.

Suzanne said...

God, look at all your fans. You are a hit mister!

When I move back home you can come to the Catskills. Just drive with a wee bit of respect. What?

XO

Jaime said...

expect the unexpected... i couldn't help it. i'm watching the big brother theme song ENDLESSLY because andrew thinks it's GREAT music.

Joanna Jenkins said...

AWE-SOME story! Hollywood will be knocking on your door soon. Don't forget us little people :-)
xo

Kris said...

I miss the ebola virus. Swine flu lack pizzaz.

dizzblnd said...

This is Survivor meets Solitary, meets 28 days, meets Stargate. What a great story I can't wait to read the reat!

Candie Bracci said...

Yeah THE TWILIGHT ZONE's storyteller has returned!Really good although really scary Otin!:)

mark said...

great story! I was just looking for limousine hire but i think I may have changed my mind!!!

Tricia said...

You're an excellent writer. It did show me just how naive I am. I thought it was a true story and Jason was your son until the ebola part. :)