He begged her to call
She hesitated, then dialed
A spark was ignited
A connection was born
Their bond now unbreakable
Strengthens each day
Still miles apart
Yet joined at the heart
Soon to be united
A temporary union
Divided once more
Strengthens the bond
A long life together
When they both say I do
Tell a story in exactly 55 words. For more, go visit G Man
51 comments:
There be RIGHTEOUS amounts of truth, there, Otin. Excellent!
Mine is here. Had some trouble fiction-izing today; so I went with something stranger.
I've been touching on a lot of themes of love this week. I loved this. You might like the first Song Saturday I post this week. Maybe you could play it for Blue Violet. :)
I'm up too!
Awwwww, you old Romantic you!
Love is a stronger bond than Gorilla Glue I do believe.
Excellent 55 My Friend.
Thank you for this fine contribution, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...Galen
Very beautiful Otin!!
Inspired by a true story??
I'm still single...
Clearly I have a lot to learn. :)
I like the part about being "joined at the heart".
My own Friday 55 is posted right HERE.
otin, you are turning into a big softy...pretty soon they will think of teddy bears instead of serial killers when they think of you. smiles.
really cool actually...so happy for you.
late friday, early saturday...just let me know...brotin is back!
Just beautiful. I'm so witsful...
my goodness...I hardly recognize you anymore! :)
Beautiful poem Otin!
how sweet.
Sweetheart, we talk often about how it all began, and the memories are precious. I love everything about our relationship, and I truly do look forward to that day when we say our vows. I will love you until the end of time. :)
Hear that Family! She loves me! hahaha!
blueviolet- I love you very much and you have helped to turn my life in a positive direction. I look forward to every second that we spend together! How many more days?? :)
one day I will tell the full story of our history, this was just a quick version!
LOL- I don't know what is more romantic, your posts or your comments to each other. You know I wish you both the best.
Very very nice post for your BV love!! Happy Friday!!
You two are so sweet! I can't wait to hear the whole story!!
Ya'll better have a virtual wedding so that we can all attend. If not, at least post the video because I can't wait to see you two together.
Your posts are so sweet these days. She's a lucky gal!
Cupid's arrow has found it's mark.
Love the story and Brian is right, you're becoming a big mush! Soon enough all your stories will have a happy ending.
Sing it, brother!
Awww. Sweet.
That was uber sweet.
You two are sooo cute!
Wonderful happiness!
I'm just smiling.
Beautiful!!
Take care
Hey that's far out Otin. I started doing it too...the Magpie Tales one...I'll also go and do 55 I think. Here's my first one:
http://www.brajas.com/2010/02/over-at-magpie-tales-there-is-weekly.html#comments
Miles make no difference.. great 55
Time fills the logistical needs of the desire building.
I find this post absolutely endearing! I just adore a good love story...this is better because it's real!
You are in love?
WOW... love is VERY GOOD.
I really like this one,
so romantic and full of anticipation.
hugs
shakira
http://justmeshakirack.blogspot.com/2010/02/flash-friday-55-darn.html
This is so cool!! I loved each word.
DAMSEL IN DISTRESS 55 for me this week. [scroll down a bit to find 'er]
Awesome 55, Otin! :)
Autobiographical?! -Jayne
I have to tell you, this is one of the most fun things I have done online and I am not the one doing anything! Maybe because hubby and I met online I have a special soft place for online love, but watching the spark from way back and things progressing is a blessing. Great and sweet Flash 55.
you really are a romantic one!!! lol
i love it!!! :-)
warm smiles to both you and BlueViolet -- enjoy the heat!
You make it look easy, Otin!
Wow that is a life time story in 55. Awesome.
A nice romantic post - loved it!
Now this is one so many will understand and feel.
Here's mine
What a minute...was this a 'chick 55'? Where's the car chase? ;)
Nicely done...
Here's my 55 here
This truly warm the cockles of my heart. Nice, very nice.
All together now, ALL WE NEED IS LOVE!
Mine's Up: The Loft
I'm incredulous.
That poem made me tear up!
I'm so happy for you both!
Awww, that was wonderfully romantic.
You're both in my thoughts that your time apart will be short!
xoxo
You sure can tell what's(who!) on your mind lately! Good for you!
Very romantic I'm sure but wait until she has to pick up your socks and watch you scratch your . . .ooops. So what's taking so long to get together?
dropping it at 8 pm.
And they lived happily ever after. Two in a row with happy endings. I think you have been inspired, n'est pas?
Namaste
Sounds exciting and wonderful...new and true love.
Awww. You big softy. Are y'all going to do a wedding vlog?
Lovely poem! can't wait to hear the whole story of how you got together!
How precious. I am so happy for the two of you.
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