"If you're gonna be stupid... You gotta be tough!"
WOW, I definitely was not expecting that ending :0)
ha. love the twist...there is life on mars...smiles.
You are a twisted twisted man. Lovely...but twisted. Now we know though what happened on the red planet. it went dry.
You are a marvelous writer, truly talented!Secretia
THAT...WAS...AWESOME...! And really makes on wonder...
Such a good story. From a bottle to Mars, WOW.hugsshakira
Coolio, Julio. Me likey.
The ending got me too! You do that alot... :-DNamaste
how many years? Great ending.
Why must all life forms ruin the planets they live on??? First Mars, now Earth. =:O I love your stories, sweetie!!! I love you!!!!
blueviolet- thank you for everything! the support and praise are nice, but it is you that I adore. I LOVE YOU!
a great story -- i love the end, didn't see it coming!! there is life on Mars after all...warm smiles,
Clever! Me likey! Great story!
I see there is life on mars! Good story.
Loved the twist but I still wanted to keep on reading! Don't ever stop writing!
Yes! Good ending. We all should put a note in a bottle. You never know....
Cool! Life on Mars? I'm ready.
You certainly know how to give a surprise ending! Love it.
Wow, great story! I loved the twist at the end. Genius! LOL!
I like that you still got JOHNSON in there somehow!!Loved the twist at the end. You rock Otie!
Twilight Zone material!
great story. made me grin. yet another brilliant story.
Great job, Otin. And it's nice to see that Bambi's the only one that has mentioned the Johnson!
WOW! I loved this...I never expected the ending though!
I have David Bowie in my head now!
wha? how? who?Am I the only one left questioning? lol
Just noticed you have a button! I am so snagging it! Only problem is that you spelled your name wrong. ;o)
That was a good one! Excellent twist at the end. Bravo!
I will never look at my son's stick figure drawings the same way again. ha. So serious then so funny.
Oh wow! Never saw that one coming. Great story, as usual.
Men really are from Mars!!
As always Otin, I love your buried message at the end. Fantastic.
Awesome story!!! I left you a message about my situation. Thank you SO much for the prayer!
Excellent twist. Well done. We have similar stories (well...other than the obvious theme) and yet completely different...
Well, there WAS life on Mars...wonder how they screwed up THEIR planet?
Cool post, Otin... it's always a treat to stop by here!
Well, well, well... That was a twist.
Your ending, as always, knocked me alien socks clean off.Lovely, Otin. Just lovely. Now I'm barefoot again.Mine is here.
nicely done. love the twisty ending.
Awesome story! Really well done!
Another unexpected ending and another winner!
That was a wicked cool ending. I loved it! I'm up too. Come check it out.http://inappropriatesue.blogspot.com/2010/02/theme-thursday-bottle.html
Ooooh...I knew it!
i didn't expect that....
I just loved this, Otin.I actually got a little jolt at the ending, very nice : )
It was a slow agonizing twist for me. You are quite a storyteller.
Great tale, great ending, great post.
wow, awesome. sooooo sad... but a light at the end of the tunnel so to speak....c
They coulda used Tom Hanks & Wilson. Sad story, nice twist. You're getting better and better!
You are King of the Twist(s)! ;) Loved it, Otin! :)
Nice twist at the end!
As always...Great!!!!
Good one! You have a very fertile imagination, Otin!
Very very cool!
Wow... Great story. Love the ending... ;) xoxo M.
I loved this one! The playing of 'notes in a bottle' are endless. -J
I love it love it love it!! Come by my place for an award!!
Move over Ray Bradbury, Otin is in town. ;-)
Very interesting and unexpected...which seems like we should be expecting the unexpected.
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WOW, I definitely was not expecting that ending :0)
ha. love the twist...there is life on mars...smiles.
You are a twisted twisted man. Lovely...but twisted. Now we know though what happened on the red planet. it went dry.
You are a marvelous writer, truly talented!
Secretia
THAT...WAS...AWESOME...! And really makes on wonder...
Such a good story.
From a bottle to Mars, WOW.
hugs
shakira
Coolio, Julio. Me likey.
The ending got me too! You do that alot... :-D
Namaste
how many years? Great ending.
Why must all life forms ruin the planets they live on??? First Mars, now Earth. =:O I love your stories, sweetie!!! I love you!!!!
blueviolet- thank you for everything! the support and praise are nice, but it is you that I adore. I LOVE YOU!
a great story -- i love the end, didn't see it coming!! there is life on Mars after all...
warm smiles,
Clever! Me likey! Great story!
I see there is life on mars! Good story.
Loved the twist but I still wanted to keep on reading! Don't ever stop writing!
Yes! Good ending. We all should put a note in a bottle. You never know....
Cool!
Life on Mars? I'm ready.
You certainly know how to give a surprise ending! Love it.
Wow, great story! I loved the twist at the end. Genius! LOL!
I like that you still got JOHNSON in there somehow!!
Loved the twist at the end. You rock Otie!
Twilight Zone material!
great story. made me grin. yet another brilliant story.
Great job, Otin. And it's nice to see that Bambi's the only one that has mentioned the Johnson!
WOW! I loved this...I never expected the ending though!
I have David Bowie in my head now!
wha? how? who?
Am I the only one left questioning? lol
Just noticed you have a button! I am so snagging it! Only problem is that you spelled your name wrong. ;o)
That was a good one! Excellent twist at the end. Bravo!
I will never look at my son's stick figure drawings the same way again.
ha. So serious then so funny.
Oh wow! Never saw that one coming. Great story, as usual.
Men really are from Mars!!
As always Otin, I love your buried message at the end. Fantastic.
Awesome story!!! I left you a message about my situation. Thank you SO much for the prayer!
Excellent twist. Well done. We have similar stories (well...other than the obvious theme) and yet completely different...
Well, there WAS life on Mars...wonder how they screwed up THEIR planet?
Cool post, Otin... it's always a treat to stop by here!
Well, well, well... That was a twist.
Your ending, as always, knocked me alien socks clean off.
Lovely, Otin. Just lovely. Now I'm barefoot again.
Mine is here.
nicely done. love the twisty ending.
Awesome story! Really well done!
Another unexpected ending and another winner!
That was a wicked cool ending. I loved it! I'm up too. Come check it out.
http://inappropriatesue.blogspot.com/2010/02/theme-thursday-bottle.html
Ooooh...I knew it!
i didn't expect that....
I just loved this, Otin.
I actually got a little jolt at the ending, very nice : )
It was a slow agonizing twist for me. You are quite a storyteller.
Great tale, great ending, great post.
wow, awesome. sooooo sad... but a light at the end of the tunnel so to speak....
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They coulda used Tom Hanks & Wilson.
Sad story, nice twist. You're getting better and better!
You are King of the Twist(s)! ;) Loved it, Otin! :)
Nice twist at the end!
As always...Great!!!!
Good one! You have a very fertile imagination, Otin!
Very very cool!
Wow...
Great story.
Love the ending... ;)
xoxo
M.
I loved this one! The playing of 'notes in a bottle' are endless.
-J
I love it love it love it!! Come by my place for an award!!
Move over Ray Bradbury, Otin is in town. ;-)
Very interesting and unexpected...which seems like we should be expecting the unexpected.
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