Otin. It kind of gave me the feeling I have when I watch ghost stories on tv!
So, you day love is gonna smack me in the face one day, huh? Can you give me an ETA on this day of love's smackdown? I have been divorced ten years and honestly there has been nothing close to a smack, let alone a pinch or even a brush of the skin....
Sounds like you had the shit beat out of you by cupid and you kind like it! :) Hugs, Lisa
I didn't expect that. I thought it would be another gruesome 'can't sleep at night coz I have nightmares' Otin tale... but now I feel sorry for him... and her of course :0)
Amazing! You took me from thinking I was reading about a serial killer (and wondering about 'you') and two very evil people to discovering none of that was true. Very well done. You write so well. I loved it.
Phew..I'm glad he wasn't some kind of maniac jack the ripper type dude! It does take a very special person to be able to do this type of work ... My sister, an Occupational Therapist, had to do Anatomy in University. She would come home smelling of formaldehyde & just that would nearly make me puke. Nup... definitely not a job for me...I'm more into nursing people back to health!!! Great story Otin...you story guru you!!
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tight otin...i like the added element of the friend he is now doing the autopsy on...it humanizes the story...nicely done...
Otin. It kind of gave me the feeling I have when I watch ghost stories on tv!
So, you day love is gonna smack me in the face one day, huh? Can you give me an ETA on this day of love's smackdown? I have been divorced ten years and honestly there has been nothing close to a smack, let alone a pinch or even a brush of the skin....
Sounds like you had the shit beat out of you by cupid and you kind like it! :) Hugs, Lisa
Brandon ended up in the right job for him that's for sure.
Why do all boys think that kind of thing is going to make girls like them? Boys are so dumb! Well, except for you. You're wonderful and I love you!!!
Blueviolet- I promise love, cherish, obey, and never throw frog guts at you! :)
I love you, too, Sweetheart!
Wow, nicely, creepily, done!
ha, i knew when you started it out so creepy there'd be a neat twist. Cool.
I like it, I like it. Well done.
I was afraid when I first started reading this one but you fooled me. What a great story, Otin!
What a story Otin! I was totally starting to think Brandon was some sort of weirdo maniac!
So THAT is why frogs go "rippit, rippit".
Sorry.
That was sick.
But I had to do it. ha
That was a real interesting piece...loved the suspense of where you were going to take it.
Great story - I totally expected it to go a different, more morbid way (if it isn't morbid enough already!).
:)
Ha! I had this one nailed - well, except for the frog part. That was a great twist. Good story, Otin!
I am so glad for a sort of happy ending!!
That was a cool story! Once again, I thought I knew exactly where this story was going....wrong! Keep up the good work! :)
Good twist. But I thought he would be a surgeon at the end...
What a nice, tight, concise story. Great misdirection with the beginning.
I didn't expect that. I thought it would be another gruesome 'can't sleep at night coz I have nightmares' Otin tale... but now I feel sorry for him... and her of course :0)
Good one! It didn't head in the direction I thought it was going. Which makes it awesome!!
It read very well Micheal.
Amazing! You took me from thinking I was reading about a serial killer (and wondering about 'you') and two very evil people to discovering none of that was true. Very well done. You write so well. I loved it.
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I fell for the whole serial killer thing, too... which was your evil plan all along! Well done, Otin!
You know I read this twice. The first time quickly because I was scared.
The second time was for the entertainment value.
I seem to do that alot over here! :)
you are one great story teller, my friend.
The word ironic comes to mind..
AWESOME!
(Since you went '80s, i thought i would too.)
Loved it, Otin!
Once again.
=-)
Great story, loved it. You had me thinking "serial killer" all the way.
Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!
Phew..I'm glad he wasn't some kind of maniac jack the ripper type dude! It does take a very special person to be able to do this type of work ... My sister, an Occupational Therapist, had to do Anatomy in University. She would come home smelling of formaldehyde & just that would nearly make me puke. Nup... definitely not a job for me...I'm more into nursing people back to health!!! Great story Otin...you story guru you!!
Oho! You tricked me! Nice work.
I thought he was going to end up being her surgeon. Nice ending and not predictable. As usual. :)
Ha! Clever. Very, very clever. Reminds me of my biology class days! Although I never puked! Just made my male lab partner cut up the frog! LOL!
i thought he was going to kill her. you always keep your readers guessing.
I was hoping he was a Medical Examiner doing an autopsy! *whew!!* So glad that was the case...still chilling, though! :)
Good one Dexter, um, I mean Otin
Very good ending. I didn't even think of that. Good story!
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