Thursday, August 5, 2010

The Crystal Sea

How could a family be so close in proximity, and yet be so far apart? It was a question that Karen Willard often asked herself. She knew what the answer was. It was those damned computers!

Richard Willard had bought enough computer equipment to run a small company. He purchased an expensive desktop unit for the house and three laptops, one for him and the other two for the couple’s teenage children. He had tried to convince Karen that it was for improving their education. She could not imagine how video games and music downloads were going to improve her kid’s grades, but she bit her lip and let Richard have his way.

Over the next year, the Willards became a family divided. Richard would park himself in his recliner and play on the computer every moment that he had available, while the kids would retreat to the solitude of their bedrooms and do the same. Karen felt like she was a woman living alone. She began to spend time on the computer in the den. She was not very knowledgeable when it came to technology but was a fairly intelligent woman. She would ask her husband for pointers here and there, but for the most part, if she could not figure something out then she would just forget about it.

Richard had gotten lost in the world of blogging. He thought that his stories and poetry were so good that people were flocking to his site to read his masterful works. He did not realize that it was more of a social network than an artistic medium, or maybe he did.

Richard seemed to get off on the attention that he was getting from these virtual strangers. The comments were like a drug to him. He had to have them. The higher the numbers, the happier that he was. Soon he was blogging ten hours a day and working forty hours a week. It was his family who had become virtual strangers to him.

One day, Richard was reading through his comments and found a new follower to his site. Her name was Crystal C. He clicked onto her profile and then over to her blog which was entitled : Sailing the Crystal Sea. It was a wonderful collection of poetry and stories, but what caught Richard’s attention was the profile photo on the blog. The woman, who’s name was listed as Crystal, was gorgeous. She was the type of woman that he was naturally attracted to. He began to visit her blog every day and leave upbeat comments. She became a regular on his site, also.

Months went by and Richard’s crush on Crystal grew. She was also giving indications that she was interested in him. He decided to make a bold move.

Richard sat down one night and wrote out a very emotionally charged email in which he expressed his feelings for Crystal. He searched for a good picture of himself to send in the message. He had never posted his photo on his blog, so she had no idea what he looked like. While he was writing the message, Karen came into the living room to ask her husband a question.

“Honey, how do I put something on Ebay?”

“Can’t you see that I’m busy!” Richard snapped.

Karen was blown away. Her husband had never been that short with her before.

“Never mind!” She yelled back and stormed out of the room.

Richard didn’t care at that moment. His mind was obsessed with Crystal. He uploaded his photo and sent his email.

He was not expecting what happened next. Crystal Emailed back saying that Richard was a striking man and that she wished that they could meet. Richard was blown away. The two bloggers only lived about five hours apart. A meeting would not be that difficult.

They exchanged more emails:

Richard to crystalc34@tmail.com:

We could meet, let’s say in Worthington?

Crystal to RichardWWII@tmail.com:

That would work. I have to do it during the week. Hubby is home on weekends.

Richard to crystalc34@tmail.com:

Good for me too. I can call out of work. Wife won’t know that I’m gone.

Crystal to RichardWWII@tmail.com:

How about the rest area on 17? We could picnic in the field there.

Richard to crystalc34@tmail.com:

Next Tuesday okay?

Crystal to RichardWWII@tmail.com:

Good for me. Lets say about 10.

Richard to crystalc34@tmail.com:

See you there!

Crystal toRichardWWII@tmail.com:

Bring wine and condoms!

The last email gave Richard an erection, something that Karen did not seem to do for him anymore. He could not wait to meet his new found girl.

Tuesday morning arrived and Richard was giddy with anticipation. Karen seemed very suspicious of the way that he was acting.

“Why are you in such a good mood, Hon? I have never seen you so happy to go to work on a Tuesday morning.”

“Big meeting today at ten, Babe. Could mean a promotion.”

“I hope that they don’t fuck you around this time. You always get your hopes up and then you are so depressed when it falls through.”

“Well, if I get fucked at this meeting, it will be pretty much what I expect,” Richard said with a smile. “I won’t let it bother me, I promise. At least I get out of doing the same old same old, today.”

He gave Karen a kiss and headed out. He felt extremely guilty, but also excited. Crystal was really on his mind. The two had emailed back and forth all weekend and had set up a game plan.

Crystal would bring the picnic supplies and Richard would bring the wine and condoms. They were supposed to meet at ten, but he was so excited and filled with anticipation that he arrived almost an hour early. The rest area was deserted, as it usually was. Not many vehicles used route 17 since the interstate had been built. Richard reclined his driver’s seat, put on the radio, and closed his eyes, trying to calm himself down. The last thing that he expected was to fall asleep.

He awoke to a woman’s voice.

“Wake up sleepy head,”

He opened his eyes and saw the time on the radio. It was only 9:30. He was still half an hour early. He hated that his first introduction to Crystal was going to be like this.

Before Richard’s eyes could fully adjust, he felt a sharp pain in his chest area. He looked down only to see the handle of a kitchen knife protruding from his chest and blood gushing down his belly, soaking into his expensive shirt. He looked up and saw Karen with a second knife. She plunged that one into his neck. He began to fade from life as he listened to Karen’s rant.

“You bastard! You cheating Bastard! I read your emails to that bitch! You thought that I was a dummy and that I could never catch you, but I taught myself.”

She pulled the knife out of his neck and stuck it in again.

“I’d say you got fucked on this meeting, Sweetheart, and I am going to kill that Crystal bitch too!!”

“Karen….I….am…..sorry,” were Richards last words as he drifted from the world of the living.

Later that night, after throwing the knives into a river and cleaning herself up, Karen walked through the quiet house. The kid’s doors were closed and the rooms were quiet. They were obviously online and had no time for her. She felt like they would probably never even miss their father. She knew that she would probably get caught for killing Richard. Evidence would eventually lead back to her.

She really had flip flopped on what to do with Crystal. Part of her hated the bitch and wanted to kill her, but then another part of her felt that it was not Crystal’s fault that Richard was such a weakling. Crystal had brought about the truth and strangely enough, Karen actually felt a little indebted to her.

Karen sat down at the computer and put in her ID and password and pulled up her own blog. She went into her settings and found the delete blog button. Her finger hovered over the button for a minute but then she had a change of heart. She decided to keep her site. She would not hit delete. Sailing The Crystal Sea was Karen’s creative outlet. It was a place where her stories and poems would exist long after she would be convicted and sentenced for killing her husband.

Crystal would live to see another day.

40 comments:

Marissa said...

OH MY GOD!! This story is my absolute favorite. I'm so glad I didn't go to the end first, like usual. Bravo bravo *clapping*

LOL "Bring wine and condoms!" I'm gonna start ending my emails with that.

TechnoBabe said...

Great twist with the wife being Crystal after all. Hey I don't feel sorry for him at all. Smile.

Meathead said...

Yep! That was a good one! At first I thought it was the wife, but you threw me off for a bit. Awesome!
That dang iternet can get ya into heaps of trouble.
Silly silly Richard.

Brian Miller said...

nice. and that is the danger of blogging too much...lol. great twist otin!

Quirkyloon said...

Aw, I want Karen to get away with it!

I want a happy ending! Let her get away with it!

Kidding?

Great story Otin! You have such an imaginative and intriguing mind that translates so incredibly well into your stories!

Matty said...

The twist I was guessing on was wrong. I thought his wife Karen was Crystal in disguise. You got me again.

The message here sounds familiar. We talked about this. I'm not surprised that you wrote about it. Great message for some people.

Jessie said...

this was really good. i hope people pay attention to what you're saying...

warm smiles,

Tom said...

a modern twist to 'do you like pina coladas'

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Adoption of Jane said...

I am waiting for your book Otin!!!!! Please! I love your writing!

The Urban Cowboy said...

Awesome story and twist! Very cool indeed.

The Retired One said...

I guessed this from the beginning!!
I bet a lot of couples are lost in this dilemma..being too busy for each other!

ReformingGeek said...

Good job, Otin.

Bring on those comments!!!

;-)

Sandra said...

Great...now I'm feeling guilty for blogging...Like i needed more guilt!
But terrific story, did not see that ending coming!

Mama Zen said...

This is awesome!

Lori said...

Love it!!! I loved the twist! Another great story...a book is in order for you!!

Andrew said...

Hey! Another great story.

Thanks Otin.

Raven said...

I hope Karen gets away with it! Great story!

the walking man said...

Blogging never rises to the expectations of the blogger now does it. This one was finely honed with a sharp point at the end.

sagirl said...

Excellent, Otin, great story!

Kathy's Klothesline said...

I was hoping for a nicer ending, a reconnection of husband and wife ..... too predictable and it was you, after all, writing this ....

AmyLK said...

Good story! He got what he deserved. I hope Karen gets away with it. :)

Joanna Jenkins said...

That totally worked for me.

"Bring wine and condoms!" Ha.

Nice job, jj

AngelMay said...

Reminds me of a REAL story I uncovered recently. The son of an old friend who passed away... I located him on Facebook. He was obviously married. Then I searched for his name just using Google and discovered him on a "dating" site looking for a "special friend" to "spark his sex life."

sheri said...

WOW, OTIN!!! was this ever good!! i somehow expected crystal to be the one to 'get' him but your ending was so, so much better than my little imagination! bravo!

Baino said...

Aww a few home truths in this one (re everyone on the computer, not online infidelity). Nice story actually. Fair warning, be careful who you play with! (Condoms on the first date, shame on her! Hussy)

Respectfully Yours said...

Holy Crap what a story. Loved the twist. Computers can be deadly, for sure.

Nessa said...

I loved it. I knew Karen and Chrystal were one in the same but I didn't expect the killing. You are such a romantic.

Jill said...

I knew there was a reason I needed to back off blogging for the summer!

Good one Otin!

gayle said...

Scary! Now I am afraid to meet anyone:)

CatLadyLarew said...

And here I thought Karen created Sailing the Crystal Sea just to put some spice back in her marriage!

Pseudo said...

I see you are working through some blogging mixed feelings ; -)

Great story. Loved every bit of it.

jennifer said...

I'm here by way of Matty's blog and so glad! This was an incredible story.

kel said...

I love, love, love this!!!! Great job!!!!!

Erin said...

following you now through Matty Thoughts...loved my "introduction!"

;-)

lisleman said...

Knives - oh that's so personal and close up.

Rest in peace at the rest stop.

Hey, I read you met another blogger in real life. I stopped over here from Matty's place.

Mighty M said...

This would make for a great episode on some crime show!!

Bee and Rose said...

Absolutely brilliant!

Maggie said...

That shit does happen!! I can soooo relate!! Only that I didn't kill him. lol

Pat said...

This was AWESOME!! Truly loved it!