snap...as i was reading the first part i was thinking oh this was easy...(smiles)...then i began to get scared for you...(smiles)....wondering how much of this was real...(smiles)...you have got it in spades my friend...engaging and thrilling...
I'm with Brian! I was smiling thinking we were being treated to a glimpse of your weekend! By the end of the story, I was hoping it wasn't REALLY your weekend! I'm sure you had a MUCH better one! Great story!
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Babe, this is one of my favorite stories that you've written! It's so good!!!!!
I also like seeing bits of real life interwoven in your tales, and since we're together all the time now, I recognize it easily. It's fun!
I love you, sweetie! (I could probably walk across the hall to where you're sitting right now and tell you all this instead of commenting, huh? But we bloggers...we're built to comment.)
My blog reading time has been GREATLY limited lately and I popped in to see what you had written lately and I was NOT disappointed! FREAKISH! FOR SURE!
Oh, and such good news in the post below! So glad I got to pop by and catch that post!
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such an overused word in your case but dare I say it again...
BRILLIANT!
Awesome story - I am so glad he got out alive!!!
Whoa.
Whoa.
Whoa.
I'm sorry, but that was mesmerizing!
Whoa.
Leave it to Otin to twist it up! Very eerie! I love how you grabbed our attention and then put your wonderful little turn at the end. Great story.
Wish I had your evil imagination, Otin - G R E A T story!!!
Wish I had your evil imagination, Otin - G R E A T story!!!
snap...as i was reading the first part i was thinking oh this was easy...(smiles)...then i began to get scared for you...(smiles)....wondering how much of this was real...(smiles)...you have got it in spades my friend...engaging and thrilling...
Ahhh. All is right with the World once again...
Otin's Back!!!
Loved it!
=-)
Really good read. A real thriller.
I'm with Brian! I was smiling thinking we were being treated to a glimpse of your weekend! By the end of the story, I was hoping it wasn't REALLY your weekend! I'm sure you had a MUCH better one! Great story!
I'm with Quirky.
Whoa!
Whoa!
I almost thought it was about you....
Whoa!
Good one, Otin!
as always you post great stories. thanks for sharing.
Holy crap! That was awesome...wow! I so enjoyed this. :) Glad to read your writings once again! :)
A thrilling joy as always. Bravo!
This sounds familiar. Didn't you write a similar story involving a man having a strange experience in a hotel bathroom?
Next time I'm staying at a hotel, I'll keep my eyes closed in the bathroom. No looking at pictures.
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You could give King and Koontz a lesson in build up to tension and release. Very Nicely done Micheal.
geezo...that had me right to the very end.
Awesome again, Otin.
Get an agent Otin, that was absolutely brilliant and should be published.
My fav, by far.
Glad I didn't read this in a hotel room!
Wow! This is my first visit here, and, just, WOW! I'll definitely be back!
nicely done Otin!!
nicely done...
warm smiles,
Jeez, Otin! I'm completely freaked out, but couldn't stop reading. One of your best...
xoxo
BRAVO!!! LOVE IT!!! EXCELLENT!!
what's a little murder between lovers?
Heat-stopping! Great read.
Very Stephen King. Great concept, well told story.
Another great story! I think you missed your calling, my friend.
I'll be sleeping with the lights on tonight.
Nice job Otin!
jj
One question...what the hell did you eat before you went to bed the night before writing this piece.
I really enjoyed it because I couldn't guess the outcome..Bravo.
Oh my God I have freakin CHILLS!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
What a great story and I love the ending!!
Awesome story!
I'm so glad he got out alive.
Thanks
B
Babe, this is one of my favorite stories that you've written! It's so good!!!!!
I also like seeing bits of real life interwoven in your tales, and since we're together all the time now, I recognize it easily. It's fun!
I love you, sweetie! (I could probably walk across the hall to where you're sitting right now and tell you all this instead of commenting, huh? But we bloggers...we're built to comment.)
I love you too and think that it is hysterical that we still email!! lol
Oooh, another chilling tale! I'm glad he listened to the boy and ran!
My blog reading time has been GREATLY limited lately and I popped in to see what you had written lately and I was NOT disappointed! FREAKISH! FOR SURE!
Oh, and such good news in the post below! So glad I got to pop by and catch that post!
I think you should put all your short stories together and get them published.
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