Jennifer faced the window as her husband, Vincent, continued to snore. The window was being pummeled with raindrops and the morning sun seemed late to appear due to the dark storm clouds. She proceeded to roll out of bed and stretch her tired body. She looked over at Vincent.
He was looking so old these days. His once full head of dark hair had been replaced by a thin layer of gray, and his athletic body was now hidden by a layer of flab. She wondered when they had both gotten so old.
Jennifer made her way to the bathroom. She looked around the large room and for the first time took notice of how long they had lived in their home. The bathroom furniture seemed to be almost antique looking, even though she had bought it when it was new. She looked back at Vincent one more time and then shut the door. She wanted change in her life but had no idea where to start. She was just not happy anymore. Jennifer ran the bath water and took a long, hot shower.
After she finished drying off, she opened the bathroom door and stepped back into the bedroom. Her jaw dropped and she grabbed the door frame to stabilize herself. The room was not the same room that she had slept in the night before. All of the furniture was brand new and the home itself had that new house smell. She glanced at the bed and looked at Vincent. It was her husband, but not the one that she had left a few minutes earlier. It was the young and fit version of him. Then she realized that while the furniture was new, it was the same furniture that she had purchased over twenty years ago. She looked back into the bathroom and gazed at herself in the mirror. She was still old. The gray hair and wrinkles were as prominent as they had been earlier that morning. She felt like she must be in a dream. She heard a groan and then Vincent spoke.
"Honey, why are you up already?" he asked.
She turned on the light, revealing her sixty year old face to her twenty something looking husband, expecting that he would recoil in horror.
"Baby, you're so beautiful!" he exclaimed. "I want to make love to you right now."
"Vincent, is this a dream? Don't you see that I'm an old woman?"
"Jenny, honey, what's wrong with you? Why are you acting all crazy? I'm older than you are."
Jennifer was confused. It had to be a dream. There was no way that he could look at her and not see that she was an old woman. She climbed back under the covers and began to mutter.
"Wake up, wake up, please wake up," she said over and over.
Vincent got up, shifting his underwear to adjust for his erection. He figured that her bizarre behavior meant that there would be no love making that morning. He shuffled into the bathroom and looked at himself in the mirror. He was young and fit, rippling with defined muscles and a six pack abdomen. He wondered if he would ever be out of shape. He peed, washed his hands and headed back into the bedroom.
When he opened the door, something seemed different. The house smelled musty and the furniture in the room appeared to be old and worn out. He looked over at Jennifer and his heart almost stopped. Why was there an old woman in his bed?
She rolled over, exposing her full face, the deep crows feet etched in the corner of her eyes.
"Honey, come back to bed and make love to me," she said.
It was Jennifer's voice, but it was not the woman who he had left a few minutes earlier.
He hoped that it was all a dream.
33 comments:
ehy not a bad dream at all...slightly jealous you are getting paid...smiles. dreaming my six pack into place right now...
Very strange in a good way...kind of Twilight Zone!!
Lots of questions - and lots of answers. We see things differently, depending on our mood... We never see ourselves the same way that others do... I love this story, Otin. Nice to see you back! Wouldn't mind a Brotin story again, eh?
People wishing for something else should be careful, eh. Acceptance is a good thing.
My dreams always involve Diet Dr. Pepper and I'm glad that when I awake, my beloved cans are still there....nothing changed.
*dreamy sigh*
Thanks for reminding me to be grateful! Ha!
they got hold of some bad weed--don't tell me that's what you're being paid with!
Wow, freaky.
And I totally need new furniture...but not that kind, lol.
Love the work in of the link!
3 words for Jennifer: Oil of Olay
Haha! Love it. Even though it gives me goofbumps (as my nephew says).
:)
I have two canes and refuse to use them. The old lady just doesn't get it. Once you give in to aging you inevitably age. I may be musty and out of date but I'll be damned before I age.
Bobby, Pam, & Dallas
flashed in my head. Aaaaack!
The portal is in the potty.
I have a bunch of things I could wish for.
SO glad you're back!
That is one powerful and NASTY mirror! Somebody break it, quick!
Isn't that just like life? Our partner NEVER seems to be on the same sex wave that we're on! LOL!
I'm with Fragrant... who needs a mirror like that?
Congrats on getting paid Otin!
That mirror needs to go! lol Good story, Otin!
Congrats. Great story.
warm smiles,
wow this is a great post... I fear aging... it's hard to imagine myself looking older but it's gonna happen..
Hopefully it feels like a dream
Excuse me. I need to go check the mirror.
Sigh.
;-)
I think it's ingenious!! PS Im with Brian and a bit jealous myself.....
What a great way to earn some moolah and keep us entertained! :)
One sounds like a dream the other more like a nightmare.
cool deal!!!!
I am now going to remove all the mirrors in my house.
Otie, This is such a perfect place to be. Where the characters are literally not seeing eye to eye and still communicating on the same level.
-J
Nice. Congrats on getting paid..as you should be..I've said it before I hope to see a novel written by you in the future. :)
Great dream & I ♥ CSN :)
just dropping in to wish you and violet on your first thanksgiving, a very happy and blessed one! may you and yours have a day filled with warmth and lots of love.
BTW if i'd known when i was in havelock, nc. that you were close by i sure woulda made an effort to drop by!!! maybe next time cuz i will be going again..
I know you disabled comments on that post for a reason, but you should know I'm kinda pushy sometimes! ;-)
That was beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us. Happy Thanksgiving!
hehe...looks like i am not the only one with the idea to bombard the alst poet...gobble gobble and happy thanksgiving you turkey...smiles.
an offer like that is hard to refuse. Just ordered a goody from CSN this morning :D
Love how you wove it into your story - very clever and resourceful!
Hmmmm, guess I will pop into the bathroom tomorrow and hope the old lady crows feet have disappeared like Jennifer's!
I was hoping you would post once of your twisted stories here and there.
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