1996
The
crowd erupted into chaotic screams as Incorrigible,
the world’s biggest rock band, made their way to the stage. Wasting little
time, they picked up their instruments, immediately breaking into the song, “Are We Alone.” With a bombastic riff behind his
gravelly voice, Kirk Cochoran belted out the lyrics, eventually screeching the
final lines.
The candles and the stained glass
Comforted my heart
As
the bitterness in my brain
Tried
to tear their world apart
I
am no one
I
am someone
Isn’t
life so odd
I
am no good
I
am so good
A
child of some God
The audience went crazy as the feedback from the guitar Kirk was playing
continued to hum, even after the song had come to a thunderous conclusion. He
let the instrument hang from its strap, freeing up both of his hands. Kirk then
grabbed the microphone stand and pulled it up to his skinny, five foot nine
inch frame, almost as if he were humping it.
“It’s
great to be fuckin’ home!” he screamed, causing the crowd to cheer. “We’ve
played all over the world, but I can tell you, Portland’s where the party’s at.
This is also a special night for us. One year ago today, we released “Corporate Generation” as a single.”
Tommy
Hanes, the band’s bassist, and Carlos Russo, the drummer, began to play the
rhythm section of the song, while Kirk tantalized the fans with his introduction
to the decade’s biggest hit.
“Tonight
we want to bring it back to where it all started,” he continued, unplugging his
fancy red Fender guitar and trading
it for an old, worn out, black model.
The
feedback from the amplifier intensified as the old guitar came to life. The
high pitched humming was so loud it brought pain to Kirk’s ears. He immediately tried to turn it down using
the control knobs on the instrument, but nothing was working. The unsettling
noise became shrill enough that even the half-stoned crowd couldn’t take it any
longer. Kirk reached down to unplug his line, and that’s when all hell broke
loose. A surge of electricity made its way through the guitar and into the
rocker’s body. He began to shake from the current ripping through him. Saliva
boiled from his mouth as he fell backward onto the stage.
“Cut
the mother fucking power!” Tommy Hanes screamed.
Security,
roadies, and emergency officials stormed the stage. The electricity was cut
off, but sparks still flew from Kirk’s gyrating body. By this time, the genius
songwriter of his era was on fire. His eyes had exploded from out of his head,
and cooking brain matter splattered the stage like popcorn from a popper.
Security officers tried to spray him with fire extinguishers, but nothing could
douse the blaze. The power was completely dead, and so was Kirk. The
electricity that had settled into his body refused to leave. Blue sparks
continued to fly as the pile of charred bone and flesh burned its way through
the bottom of the stage and down to the next level of the building. Hoards of
people soon pushed their way to the scene, hoping it was all some sort of
tricky gimmick that had been perpetrated by the band. The sight of Tommy Hanes
down on his knees, throwing up, and Carlos Russo bawling hysterically, should
have been a clue to them it was no hoax. By the time the event was over, all
that remained of Kirk Cochoran was fourteen pounds of cremated ashes and a rock
and roll mystery for the ages.
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14 comments:
well heck...what good is that...its the last chapter you read first...smiles...nah, very cool bro...
I'm on page 60 now.
Yes, it is good. Hell of a start.
Boy, that's a great cliff hanger.
Flash 55 - You Get What You Ask For
Have I ever mentioned how much I LOVED this book? :P
xoxox
Okay, I'm getting this book.
Okay, I'm getting this book.
Wow! What an opening! I'm hooked!
Just got mine for my Kindle!
"The power was completely dead, and so was Kirk." Why I love that sentence, I don't know, but I do. I guess I am a little sick.
Well connecting on linked in has sold you another ebook. I will have fun reading this.
Holy crap! If that isn't a good hook for an opening chapter, I don't know WHAT is! Great job!!!!
I just took a break from Words With Friends long enough to go buy your book!! I'll try to remember to post a review on Amazon for you when I finish it!! :-)
Well I bought and read your book!
You gots one mighty fine TWISTED mind Sir!
I was not disappointed with all those twists! Eeeek!
And you made me blush a couple of times. Hey, what can I say? I'm a modest loon. heh heh
It had all the good stuff that Otin is known for: spook and twisted!
Yes!
I even tried to second guess the twists, but you got me! You got me! Especially the ending(s). heh heh
Wow! Can't wait to read it!
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